WEEK 5 - Rewriting Product packaging

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Cocoa Rice by Doves Farm Organic

Image via: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/573153490058833769/?lp=true

Who doesn’t start the day with cereal? I guess everyone does! But, have you tried our delicious crispy rice cereal with cocoa? You have to!
Doves farm organic use the best rice that grown to organic standards special from italy, then toasted in a special cocoa recipe to give you our wonderfully chocolatey Cocoa Rice.. It is 100% made in tasty and healthy to start your day!
What we use?
  • Absolutely 71% Wholegrain, do you have constipation problem? Wholegrain rice has high fiber to reduce it.
  • 20% sugar cocoa, this is our delicious source is from!
  • 5% Glucose syrup, our sweeteners made from natural ingredients and we still put it in small amount. Don’t worry!
  • 4% salt, salt of spirit to start your day, why not?!
Whoops! Here’s an allergy advice; it may contain hazelnuts and milk. But we’re gluten free, so nothing to worry about!
Above is my creative post for cocoa rice by Doves farm organic. I’m using fun as the tone, since the packaging also in fun design. I see this packaging is interesting because they used simple body copy and picture on selling their product.

By: Nur Shabrina Shofanie



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  1. yinweichiewOctober 23, 2017 at 10:09 PM

    I think by rewriting the body for this product, this product looks more appealing as it rewrites its main ingredient it's specialty in a fun tone, therefore, I think this body copy can attract consumer's attention more easily.

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